Modern Text

29 Jul

Leave me now my broken heart

Take your sadness away

Stand up strong once again

face the new day

All you are

All you’ve been

the memory of the past

Some do care

Some do not

Some never will

Thus, we carry on.

4 Responses to “Modern Text”

  1. Bacon Pro July 31, 2013 at 4:18 pm #

    You seem to have been doing this longer than I have. Like the classic type of lines. Not my style. Though I can do something similar. The only comment I can make is the spelling errors. The mind works in strange ways. Sometimes it takes quite a few times to notice an error from something you wrote yourself.

    • Bri July 31, 2013 at 5:38 pm #

      Thanks for the bacon 🙂 Mostly just inspiration. Nice catch on the spelling error -fixed:). Thanks for showing me that. – Bri

      • Bacon Pro July 31, 2013 at 8:29 pm #

        There were other errors on different posts but I seem to correct others when I miss whole words anytime I write or even text for that matter.
        I might take a break from the Bacon…
        and thanks

  2. Bri July 31, 2013 at 9:29 pm #

    I am honored you had a look around at my work. I appreciate the feedback.

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